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⬤ Riku's personality section is extremely lacking. While we encourage concision over lengthy paragraphs, we would like players to demonstrate an understanding of their characters' inner workings. What makes him so determined to go absurd lengths to save his friends? What makes him a "dweeb"? Riku has gone through a lot of emotional development throughout the series' run, yet we only read a passing mention of his insecurity, anger, and enviousness in the personality section. We feel that these are things that should be elaborated upon.
Additionally, we would like this information presented in a more formal format; bullet points are fine, but we would like to see complete sentences rather than notes on the character.
You have 72 hours to submit your revisions. If you don't get your acceptance note right away, don't worry! We send those along with everyone else's.
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⬤ Riku's personality section is extremely lacking. While we encourage concision over lengthy paragraphs, we would like players to demonstrate an understanding of their characters' inner workings. What makes him so determined to go absurd lengths to save his friends? What makes him a "dweeb"? Riku has gone through a lot of emotional development throughout the series' run, yet we only read a passing mention of his insecurity, anger, and enviousness in the personality section. We feel that these are things that should be elaborated upon.
Additionally, we would like this information presented in a more formal format; bullet points are fine, but we would like to see complete sentences rather than notes on the character.
You have 72 hours to submit your revisions. If you don't get your acceptance note right away, don't worry! We send those along with everyone else's.